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Ramble

Postby ComedyAndTradgedy » Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:46 pm

This is a song I wrote about my girlfriend before we started dating, titled "Ramble". I chose that title because I basically wrote this song without thinking, I simply spewed my feelings out onto a peice of notebook paper. Well, Here it goes.


Hey there,
Excuse me as I babble on
I really hope it's not too long
But please bear with me

I'm kind of stumbling on the words
This may be the worst song you've ever heard
Please don't ignore me and space out
Please sit down and hear me out

First if all I think your awesome
And could probably do better than me
You don't need someone to drag you down
And bring you back to earth

And I wonder,

Maybe if I changed a little,
And became a little more
What if I moved a little,
Would I get closer to it all?
Maybe if I could just
Grow a little taller
And jump a little higher
Then I could see you
And you could see me

But what if I fall?

You're roughly twenty times more talented then I will ever be
You're more than perfect, wonderful, amazing or ideal
You could fly, and reach the sky, where you're ment to be
But you stay behind, and socialize, with losers just like me

So I will try

Maybe if I changed a little,
And became a little more
What if I moved a little,
Would I get closer to it all?
Maybe if I could just
Grow a little taller
And jump a little higher
Then I could see you
And you could see me

And I know I could fall

I'm probably wasting your time
With this song of mine
Just had to get this of my chest
And let you know that you're the best
Now that I know I've set things right
Maybe I can sleep at night

Because I

Can't change a little
But maybe I can change the world
And I can't move a little
But I'm here and that's enough
I can't grow a little taller
Or jump a little higher
But since I'm not going anywhere
I thought I'd stop to say
Hello



Feedback would be great! I'd like to be able to improve it before I write the music! Thanks!
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Re: Ramble

Postby althera » Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:17 pm

Wow, amazing lyrics!!!
Don't let the evils and darkness of the world bring you down. Be a warrior--fight for what you know is right. Be a healer--heal those who are hurting. And if you fall on the way, I'll always be right there to carry you.
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