Sad, Sad, Sad

[shiningvioletstar]

So sad and true, I give you her story. . .

So mysterious and angry,
She looks around,
anger and sadness filling her somber eyes,
theres nothing left for her here,
her friends gave up,
theres nothing left for her to hold on.

She looks up at her crush,
will he ever know that she loved him?
Will he be happier if she was gone?
Will he ever know that she didn't plan this?

She looks at her so called friends,
they promised to help her,
they promised to be there,
she can't stand it anymore.

She gets home and calls her crush and friends,
she tells them she is sorry,
she tells them not to worry,
she tells them she will be with god soon.

She goes and grabs her mom's pain killers,
She can't do it,
she can't go just yet,
she flings the pain killers into the garbage.

Months later she is getting better,
she is finally dating her crush,
she has some new friends,
she realized that she didn't have to hurt herself,
because sadness was like a cage,
and love was the key.

[Jc268]

This is a wonderful piece, I think you have done a terrific job!(:
And I LOVED the ending,and it is true; love is the key
Always, lol

I do not know who this is about; you,or somebody you know or heard of
But a great way to take away the pain and hurt, is to replace it with, as you said; love
But also; friends, family, and fun/exciting activities such as music, sports, etc.

Hope this eased your feelings a little(:
I love feedback!

Your friend,
Josh

[erika08]

really felt so sad.